Good Will Hunting (Will & Sean) Scene Practice - Third Attempt
Back with the same scene again.
After the last round of feedback, I focused on three things:
1. clearer speech and consonants
2. fewer unmotivated pauses
3. stronger intentions behind each line
I'm intentionally revisiting the same scene to see if I can actually apply feedback instead of moving on to a new one every time.
I'd appreciate any thoughts on whether these changes are coming across.